49.3 Concession
ConcessionMorning simmers. Its rising heat foretells a deluge.By midday, the air trembleswith tension, yearns for release.Soon enough, the wind comes to undress me, to ruffle and rile.It snatches at...
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ooooooooooo! Gorgeous! Great body poem, with so much sensual detail. Sounds are delicious throughout. JUst wonderful! Last line is perfect!!! What’s the point of resistance when even the trees are...
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VERY nice, Toni! This one is really strong. Love the fifth couplet especially. I'd think about losing the last single line, and "yearns for release"--both things are already very beautifully...
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As is usual for you, a great visual image of an emotion and yes, oh so sensual! "Soon enough, the wind comes to undress me, to ruffle and rile."
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